💬 Blog Commenting 💬

                                                      What I know about blog commenting                                                                I know that your comments are meant to be positive helpful and thoughtful and you need a introduction a middle and a end in the middle you need it about what you liked and one thing that you can relate to in it to and the end needs to be a nice goodbye and the introduction you have a hello and introduce yourself and what school are you from. The comments also make them feel good because it is men't to be positive feedback and something they would want to hear about their work and maybe a little improvement for next time. And it needs to have positive feedback on learning so they know what to improve/change for next time.

Here is my comment that I posted on Amelia's blog 

Kia Ora Amelia I am Olivia from Yaldhurst Model School 

This post was really good I liked how your story was on how Covid-19 has been affecting our lives next time I would try and make it a little longer and more interesting and tell us how you found a way to move the chairs that would make this post a lot better. And let's hope that none of us is going to be away again so we don't have to go through this problem again.

What was your solution?

Kind regards Olivia.

Here is the link to her blog post that I commented on 

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Here is a comment that I left on a Te Mahuri student Samuel here it is 

Kia Ora Samuel Its Olivia Your sister from Yaldhurst Model School 

This blog was really cool it told me about book creator and all the cool things that you can do in book creator like add sound! and photos also that you can add colour sounds really good next time you could add more info about book creator and what you are making on it I can relate to the topic you did your book on a doggy weekend next time when you start a new sentence you can put a capital letter. And I can't wait to see your book when it is done.

Why are you doing your book on dogs?

Kind regards Olivia.

Here is the link to the blog that I posted on.

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Here are some sentence starters that can help you with writting comments

📖 Rimu Writing Competition 📖

 Hey Guys 

Today I am going 

to be telling you about our

class writting competition 

if you want to see more 

then read write on in!

 

Reflection

Next Time I think that 

I should 

add more detail onto my 

slide about the 

writting competition 

that we are having in

our class

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