Wednesday, 15 May 2019
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Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this blog post because you have lots of amazing writing and it's got a lovely background that matches. I love your idea of bubbles and doing under the sea, I did that as well.
You taught me that you can put lots of description in your writing and it's very cool.
To improve next time you need full stops at the end of your sentences, it would make your writing even more amazing. I really like your penguins spies though.
On your plan you said you were going to make friends with the penguins, why did you change your mind and make them spies?