Hello bloggers today
I will be showing my witting
That I have been doing for my online
distance learning I will share you to pieces
of my writting come on in!
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a questio
Helllo. I like how you did a lide to explain it. Next time, you could do this weeks wroiting. Goodbye, from Max.
ReplyDeleteWell doe Olivia
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you have used the pictures as a springboard to inspire your writing. I must admit that I did wonder about the cats in clothes and I like the way you have written about whether it makes the cats look silly.
For your second piece of writing: Have you ever been diving underwater? I have friends who have but I have never been tempted. I have been snorkelling but I have never seen a giant diamond.