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 Hey guys 

today I am going to tell you 

what we are doing in class 

I will give you a clue we are 

going to present it in front 

of the class if you want to know 

what it is then read on in!

Reflection

Next time I think that I will 

take some more time to 

explain the work that I have done

in speeches work.

Are You Doing Speeches?

D You Like Speeches?

What Would Your Speech Be About?

Bye Bloggers 

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📝 I have a dream... 📝

                                                                               Hey guys                                                                               I will be sharing you  with you about speeches in Rimu when I heard this I felt totally freaked out because I had to present it in front of the class before we get into all the deep learning to get ready for the speeches in order to set up our mindset we used we used the 6 tools in mental toughness tool kit but I only used for because that's all I had the room for and we used it to create a motivational drawing of ourselves we used google drawing and the drawing down below is my visualization of me during my speeches learning my dream for how it will all go.

 

                          

Reflection

when I was making this 

google i thought about the

hardest part for me will be 

getting the courage to present

my speech in front of the whole class

the easiest part is going to be 

choosing the topic for 

my speech I chose these tips

for myself because i think it 

is good to be confident 

and if I am stressed just take deep breaths 

and the next one i chose for me because 

I think it is good to slow down

and take my time and the 

speech piece by piece 

Have you done a speech?

Are you doing a speech?

Are you entering the speech competition?

If you are choosing to write a comment on my blog you can use these sentence starters 

POSITIVE -  I liked the way you...

THOUGHTFUL - Your picture of...

HELPFUL - I noticed that...

but you can use any others you wan't!

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💬 Blog Commenting 💬

                                                      What I know about blog commenting                                                                I know that your comments are meant to be positive helpful and thoughtful and you need a introduction a middle and a end in the middle you need it about what you liked and one thing that you can relate to in it to and the end needs to be a nice goodbye and the introduction you have a hello and introduce yourself and what school are you from. The comments also make them feel good because it is men't to be positive feedback and something they would want to hear about their work and maybe a little improvement for next time. And it needs to have positive feedback on learning so they know what to improve/change for next time.

Here is my comment that I posted on Amelia's blog 

Kia Ora Amelia I am Olivia from Yaldhurst Model School 

This post was really good I liked how your story was on how Covid-19 has been affecting our lives next time I would try and make it a little longer and more interesting and tell us how you found a way to move the chairs that would make this post a lot better. And let's hope that none of us is going to be away again so we don't have to go through this problem again.

What was your solution?

Kind regards Olivia.

Here is the link to her blog post that I commented on 

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Here is a comment that I left on a Te Mahuri student Samuel here it is 

Kia Ora Samuel Its Olivia Your sister from Yaldhurst Model School 

This blog was really cool it told me about book creator and all the cool things that you can do in book creator like add sound! and photos also that you can add colour sounds really good next time you could add more info about book creator and what you are making on it I can relate to the topic you did your book on a doggy weekend next time when you start a new sentence you can put a capital letter. And I can't wait to see your book when it is done.

Why are you doing your book on dogs?

Kind regards Olivia.

Here is the link to the blog that I posted on.

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Here are some sentence starters that can help you with writting comments