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Wednesday, 5 August 2020

🖊️My Teacher Broke A Pen 🖊️

Hey Guys
I am going to be showing 
you my blog post about
resilience our 
teacher has been 
talking about 
it in class if you want to 
find out more then 
bounce right in!


 

Reflection 
Next time I think in 
the blog post that I could of 
told you more about resilience 
and not just let you watch the 
video because the video 
might not tell you 
anything. 

By Bloggers 

4 comments:

  1. Hi Olivia! It's me, Hana, you new post police buddy for this term!

    Wow Olivia! I really like this DLO on resilience! I like how you explained what resilience is very clearly! The quote is also really cool!

    The quote that you choose is very meaningful, and is very deep. You have good taste, because I really like the way the quote used a metaphor, and it really makes it more interesting!

    Next time, you could use punctuation. Remember to stick to the basics of full stops and commas. Also, I think that you messed up on the questions slightly. The first question repeats itself onto the last slide. Try to fix that up. Other than that, you did a wonderful job Olivia!

    Keep up the good work!

    From Hana

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  2. Oh yeah, and if someone was reading the title, and had a look on the blog, they'll see that the title isn't relevant the the topic! You might need to tweak that a little bit! :D

    - Hana

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  3. Hi Olivia, it's me Zahrah your friend.

    I loved this because you've added a good poster that shows what it means.

    This reminded me of when I did a post like this.

    Next time, make sure to read and look at all the slide because you've got a mistake.

    Cya!😜

    -Zahrah!

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    1. Hi Zahrah
      Thank You for commenting on my blog post maybe next time you could ask a question so when I reply I can answer a question but thats for next time comment on my blog again!
      Cya

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