Hi bloggers today I will be telling you about the most incredible food in the world which was made by me! so I hope you like it and what I found hard in this blog was making the food and coming up with a good name for it but I did it anyway what I found easy was making the poster and drawing the food because for the poster I already knew what it would be called and what it was like and I liked drawing it because it was fun and I put creativity in it Enjoy!
Monday, 30 September 2019
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Hey Olivia, its me Parwin! I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey as well, the challenge is on!
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you have made the drawings yourself apart from the nuts, did you make the nuts or is it an image because it looks more like an image than a drawing. I also like that you have included some description to go with the Nutty Swirl!
This reminded me of when I did this except I did this but I made some soup which can cure any type of illness like the cold or flu or what. It is also very affordable to make as well and is also very easy too.
I think to improve, this is basically the same thing s the last time you have done this because although you have included how you felt and what you found challenging, you haven't said why you are doing it so if you include that, it would make it even better! Great job!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Kia ora Olivia, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School. (As you know.)
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put lots of colour and detail into the Nutty Swirl's look.
This reminded me of catfruit, a fruit I made up. Catfruit is totally different to this though.
To improve, you could put why you chose this activity or something like that. Also you could put in some more detail about what it tastes like.
Why did you choose an ice cream to make if you like cake more?
Bye Olivia!
-Amelia 😉