Hi bloggers today I will be telling you about would I want to stop eating cake or ice cream which I chose to stop eating ice cream rather than cake because I think that cake is more yum than ice cream
what I found hard was choosing in between ice cream and cake because they are all yum what I found easy was making the reason to want to stop eating.
hi olivia i really like the work on your blog thank you for commenting on my blog my favourite miley songs in order is malibu when i look at you best of both worlds the climb jolene party in the usa wrecking ball mothers daughter 7 things can't be tamed thank you for commenting on my blog keep up the great work from xalia๐๐๐๐
ReplyDeleteKia ora Olivia, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put in what you would rather stop eating and why.
This reminded me of when it was my birthday and we had cake. Because its would you rather stop eating ice cream or cake.
To improve, you could add a bit more writing and maybe a few pictures to make it pop.
What is your favourite cake?
What is your favourite ice cream?
Bye Olivia! I can't wait to see more of your outstanding work.
-Amelia ๐