Hi bloggers today I will be telling you about why I would like to try Avocado! and why would I like to try Avocado? because lots of people in my family like it not including my brother and also it is really healthy for you and you can have it in lots of different dishes so if I try it I hope I will like it and what I found hard in doing this blog was explaining why I wanted to try it and make it long and clear and what I found easy was making the Avocados because I love drawing and making stuff which make it cool so hope you enjoy this blog!
Tuesday, 8 October 2019
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Kia Ora Olivia,
ReplyDeleteIt's Grace I see you are doing the spring learning Journey .
Are you enjoying it?
I really liked how yo designed this and I like it .
I Liked how you explained about it and why you want to try it .
I personally love it a lot .
I like how you added more information about to help support the main idea which why you want to try it.
This reminded me when Parwin did this she did the same Avocado I acutlly just commented on hers.
To improve you could add more slides and maybe some facts about it and more why you want to try it.
But apart from thats its really good,
Keep up the great work
- Grace
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteIt is really great to see you doing so many activities for the Spring Learning Journey. They are really interesting to read and done to a high quality. You have lots of lovely comments from classmates so make sure you reply and comment on some of their work (it is extra points too).
I love avocado. It is so yummy!!! I have it with my breakfast at the moment because they are cheap and delicious. Did you know you can also make a chocolate mousse out of avocado? It is yummy and means there is no dairy in it. It tastes super yum. You could google a recipe and then make it for activity two!
Keep up the great blogging,
Mrs Spragg
Hey Olivia, it's me Parwin! I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey, the challenge is on!
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you have given lot's of information not only in your blog post but also in your presentation as well. I also like the drawings of the avocado that you made as well.
This reminded me of when I did this activity and I picked the same thing as you because that time, I hadn't tried Avocado but the next day, I tried it for breakfast and it was really nice! I too did the same thing and also included some facts about Avocado as well. Have you tried it yet? If so, did you like it?
I think that to improve, you could maybe add some more information about why you decided to do this activity and I know why you did this because I am also doing the Spring Learning Journey too but if I wasn't doing it then I wouldn't know so if you just do that then it would make your blog even better!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Hi Olivia,
ReplyDeleteIts me Alan. I see that you are doing the spring learning journey. Good luck. Anyway great blog post.
It reminded me of when I ate avocado back in India for the first time. I like it with salt and chili powder. What do you like Avocado with ?
I think it would be better if you did a background for your presentation and if you put some more information about avocado like Avocado Is Incredibly Nutritious.
Awesome work.
Kind regards
Alan
Hi Olivia .
ReplyDeleteIts Me Renae I See you are doing the Spring learning journey like me.
You might need to reread your sentences because it doesn't really make sense.why I would like to try Avocado! and why would I like to try Avocado?
I did my post on avocados and lots of people have.
Anyway this post is great.
Bye
Renae