Hey guys
today I am going to be
telling you about pet day
on Friday when finally had pet day
if you wan't to find out more about
pet day then read on
so jump on in!
I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey guys
today I am going to be
telling you about pet day
on Friday when finally had pet day
if you wan't to find out more about
pet day then read on
so jump on in!
Hey Guys
In our school pet day is coming up.
And before pet day happens
I am writting this blog
to you about the before
pet day things that we will be doing.
So run on in
to this awesome blog and
enjoy the DLO that me and
my friend made together.
Hey Guys
Today I am talking
about FAKE NEWS! you can find fake news all
over the internet on lots of different sites and I will
be giving you some tips on how to know what is real
and what is fake here is a fake news article I made
Here is how you tell if it is real or fake look at the url
if it has .com.co or .com.au then the news
that you are looking at is probably fake
we were learning about this in cybert smart
and am sharing it to you now
Hey guys
Today I am going
to share to you Arthurs
Pass Rimu Camp series number 2
so come on in to the awesome blog
Hey guys
Today I am going to tell you
about our first activity on camp
an introduce our trip to you
now drive on in into this
spectacular blog!
Hey guys
today I am going to tell you
what we are doing in class
I will give you a clue we are
going to present it in front
of the class if you want to know
what it is then read on in!
Hey guys I will be sharing you with you about speeches in Rimu when I heard this I felt totally freaked out because I had to present it in front of the class before we get into all the deep learning to get ready for the speeches in order to set up our mindset we used we used the 6 tools in mental toughness tool kit but I only used for because that's all I had the room for and we used it to create a motivational drawing of ourselves we used google drawing and the drawing down below is my visualization of me during my speeches learning my dream for how it will all go.
What I know about blog commenting I know that your comments are meant to be positive helpful and thoughtful and you need a introduction a middle and a end in the middle you need it about what you liked and one thing that you can relate to in it to and the end needs to be a nice goodbye and the introduction you have a hello and introduce yourself and what school are you from. The comments also make them feel good because it is men't to be positive feedback and something they would want to hear about their work and maybe a little improvement for next time. And it needs to have positive feedback on learning so they know what to improve/change for next time.
Here is my comment that I posted on Amelia's blog
Kia Ora Amelia I am Olivia from Yaldhurst Model School
This post was really good I liked how your story was on how Covid-19 has been affecting our lives next time I would try and make it a little longer and more interesting and tell us how you found a way to move the chairs that would make this post a lot better. And let's hope that none of us is going to be away again so we don't have to go through this problem again.
What was your solution?
Kind regards Olivia.