Hey Guys
Today I am going to show you my writing that I have been working on for a few days
it is a piece of persuasive writing it is about why schools should have a
fizzy drink option I hope you like it!
Read On!
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School Fountains Should Have A Fizzy Drink Option
Do you like fizzy drinks? Would you like to have free fizzy Drinks?
So why not let students have fizzy drink options at school. Students would be alot happier
and could produce better work. It would be more fair for the students. And there would be
an amount limit.
If students had a choice of fizzy drinks then they would be alot happier. When they are
happier they will be more ready for learning. If they are happier they will produce better
work. If they aren't happier they can suffer from depression. 25% of students suffer
from depression a year. So don’t let them suffer! Lots of students
Everyone likes fizzy drinks don’t they? So why should students have to miss out? It would be unfair!
Some students never get to have a fizzy drink. This would be giving them a chance to try..At least 30% of students haven’t even tried fizzy drinks. And that is a lot of people who
haven’t tried it.
The fizzy drink feature would have a fizzy drink option where there will be settings for
each time your child uses them they will only fill the bottle a certain amount. So the
students won’t load up on sugary drinks. So then they can’t bring lots of water bottles
from home fill them all up and brings them home.
So you think schools should have fizzy drink? Is it fair that students don’t get fizzy drinks
at school or not? Well it is unfair! Also the students won’t get to have that much drink and
students would be happier to produce more and better work.So overall we should have
fizzy drink let there be fizzy drinks at school!
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